Showing posts with label Friends. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Friends. Show all posts

Monday, March 20, 2017

My Special Place

My Special Place
   
“Wake Up” says mum. I jump down from my bunk and go outside. My uncle is making breakfast and my cousins, mum, dad, and sisters are sitting at the table. “Mmm smells delicious” I exclaim. Finally breakfast is ready. Yum eggs on toast my favourite.

Once we're finished we get changed into our togs and head down to the beach. First I dip my feet in to feel the temperature, The water felt as cold as freshly melted ice. I jump back realising how cold it is. I decided then that I was not going to go swimming and that I was going to make a sand castle instead. First I made a mountain of sand then collected shells to make windows and a door. “I'm done” I told mum. she took a picture and then we headed back to the caravan.

The next day Dad took me out on the Quad bike and we went down to the beach. Dad went really fast over hills and other stuff like that, it was absolutely horrifying. When we got back dad gave mum a ride. Meanwhile while they were taking ages the rest of us had lunch and played board games. When they got back they told us that they went right down the beach to the river.

When It was dark we grabbed some fireworks and lite them on the beach. They were as bright as the stars at night. Some other people came with fireworks and we had two sets of fireworks going at the same time. It looked awesome. Me, Violet and Astella loved it. Once we ran out off fireworks we went back to the caravan and had dinner. By the time we finished dinner it was bed time. I jumped into bed and had a good night's sleep.

My special place is porangahau

Tuesday, April 12, 2016

A Moment In Time

A Moment in time by Paige H


‘SPLASH!!’ as I flew down the slide with Jamie and Dannii. Jamie was in the front, I was in the middle and Dannii was behind me. Jamie was being silly and he did a pose as if he was meditating. Dannii looked at him and laughed and did it as well.


I fell over and ended up backwards on my back. When we got to a certain part of the slide there was a big curve and it pushed Jamie, Dannii and I up the side of the slide. “WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!” I yelled with laughter.


When we got to the end of the slide we wanted to do it again so we did, this time Jaden joined in so Jamie, Jaden, Dannii and I all ran up the stairs.


This time the boys were at the back trying to walk down the slide me and Dannii just slid down on our bums, then all of a sudden ‘CRASH!!’ As Caitlin Jaden and Jamie crashed into me and Dannii.


Finally we got to the end of the slide everybody was relieved. LUNCH TIME!! Mrs Lowe yelled. We all ran over to get lunch.


What a day Fun day that was.
I hope we get to go again sometime.


Reflection

  1. Grab the audience at the beginning
  2. Have at least 5-6 paragraphs and more supporting detail in them.
  3. Have good action, describing words.
  4. Have speech marks, exclamation marks,Question marks commas./Punctuation
  5. Have some complex sentences.